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Ditch
by Hal Niedzviecki
Random House, 2001
Martin Sloane
by Michael Redhill
Anchor Canada, 2001
Reviewed by Michael Bryson
When Peter Gzowski died in January 2002 part of the CBC
TV tribute included a clip from an interview conducted in the weeks
before his death. The interviewer asked Gzowski about Morningside, the highly popular CBC radio program
Gzowski helmed for many years. The interviewer said some critics had complained
that Morningside represented "not the Canada that was,
but the Canada as we wanted it to be."
At first blush this isn't a question a dying man
should have to answer, but, ever generous, Gzowski agreed that maybe this
was the case. He said Morningside was arguably more
rural-oriented during a period when Canada was becoming increasingly
urbanized, more homogenous during a period when Canada was becoming
increasingly diverse. The exchange made me think of popular conceptions
of Canadian literature, which - how can they say this?! - most people
still tend to consider boring. Too rural. Too locked in the past.
Too focused on white, Anglo-Saxon middle-class concerns during a period
when Canada is increasingly a gateway to the world.
But the fact is - as Stephen Henighan brilliantly points out in When
Words Deny the World - many of Canadian literature's recent chart
toppers point towards the past: aesthetically, thematically, and
arguably politically. For a multiude of reasons, Canadians don't
perceive themselves as artistic innovators; they tend to prefer
inherited patterns (often perpetuated by the CBC!). On the other hand,
and here Henighan lets us down, there is much evidence in the literary
creepy corners of the country that ought to lead Canadians to the
contrary opinion.
The focus of this review is two novels published in
2001: Ditch by Hal
Niedzviecki and Martin Sloane by Michael Redhill. Redhill's
book was nominated for the 2001 Giller Prize. Neidzviecki's received
little comment. But what an interesting compare and contrast study they
make! Two first novels published by thirty-something men, both based in
Toronto, both with a modest publishing history to their credit. One
would be hard pressed to find many precursors for Ditch, while Martin
Sloane has rightfully slid easily into the mainstream.
At this point it would be easy to chastise Canadian
book buyers - and awards committees! - for failing to take a risk on Ditch.
Yes, it would be nice to see Canadian literary innovators hailed more
prominently. On the other hand, Eunoia has done
remarkably well. Besides, both Ditch and Martin Sloane are
first novels - and they carry all of the baggage that implies. That is,
they sparkle in some places, and fall flat in others.
Both Ditch and Martin Sloane are novels
about troubled relationships. Ditch is about a twenty-something
deliveryman in Toronto who still lives with his mother and hooks up with
a mysterious young woman from the USA. They go on a road trip in his
van, and things end badly. In Martin Sloane, things end no less
badly, but they do end more lyrically. Martin Sloane traces the
relationship of an American undergraduate with an older Irish artist,
whom she first meets in Toronto. He mysteriously disappears in the
middle of the night, never to be seen again.
Ditch is written in Niedzviecki's patented
sparse style. Here's a random passage:
She sleeps. He cleans and bandages her feet. Strips
of skin peeled off in meticulous layers. Hours of labour, the fruit of
the flesh laid bare. He shakes when he touches her. The sun comes up,
morning. They could have been anywhere, and he wishes they were,
anywhere, somewhere, a place they'd never been, a place with history.
Niedzviecki's style delivers most of the Wows
here. It also communicates a stark feeling of alienation, as if true
connection were impossible, as if only a stripping away of all
pretension offers any hope of revealing reality.
Martin Sloane, on the other hand, might be
described as more artful, if only because it borrows the tropes of art.
The missing man is an artist, a sculptor, descriptions of his sculptures
divide sections of the novel. The novel is infused with the assumption
that art can convey meaning, and yet at the centre of the novel is a
hollow space, a missing man, a destroyed relationship. The narrator, the
woman abandoned by the artist, searches for clues of him to help put her
life back in order. To a degree she suceeds. Ditch offers no hope
of resolution, only a relentless sense of loss.
Before I wrote this review, I wanted to say something
like: Niedzviecki is on a relentless quest to articulate the present,
while Redhill has repeated a pattern too common in recent Canlit by
looking backwards at the past. I see now that this is too simple a
summation. Both are novels out of Canada, circa 2001. They are both
legitimate expressions of our moment. Ditch, however, isn't
something you would likely have ever heard about on Morningside. Which
is a pity.
Right, Peter?
Michael Bryson is the publisher/editor
of The Danforth Review.
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