Pull Gently, Tear Here
by Alexandra Leggat
Insomniac Press, 2000
Reviewed by Michael Bryson
Though it still lingers in the stale halls of academe and in the
pointy heads of arts agency bureaucrats, nationalism is dead in Canadian
literature. Margaret Atwood’s "survival" thesis was never
accurate anyway, though its popularity rode the wave of post-Expo ’67
exuberance and continues to kill brain cells in oppressed college
students across the nation. If ever there was a time for Canada’s
literary artists to express the communal anxiety about our common
future, it is now – as post-NAFTA the knives of globalism shred our
collective ability to create a distinct society across the top of North
America based on George Grant’s, Pierre Trudeau’s, or even Brian
Mulroney’s ideas of the common good.
Fortunately, however, a new generation of writers has emerged, whose
politics is distinctly personal – and whose aesthetics is part of an
artistic, not a nationalist, project. One member of this new generation
of writers is Alexandra Leggat, whose first short story collection, Pull
Gently, Tear Here, was recently released by Insomniac Press.
Many of the 34 pieces which fill this work’s 193 pages fall into
the genre commonly known as "Postcard Fiction," which is
sometimes called a contemporary trend, though it has been around at
least as long as the early books of the Old Testament (or Torah). The
form was also used brilliantly by Ernest Hemingway in his first story
collection, In Our Time (1921).
Alice Munro this collection is not. It is not lush, not lyrical, not
dull in the "poetic prose" tradition associated with big name
bores like Michael Ondattje or Anne Michaels. Leggat’s work instead
follows the work of relative newbies Hal Niedzviecki, Derek McCormack,
and Natalee Caple (see also Matt Firth, Stan Rogal, Sheila Heti, and Ken
Sparling) whose dark humour and clipped prose style owes more to Kafka
than the Canlit canon.
Leggat’s stories share many characteristics of this new and growing
crowd: intense contracted prose, narratives that explore situations on
the margins of the cultural mainstream, a reporter’s eye for telling
detail and the sparse use of metaphor or imagery. This approach is not
everyone’s cup of tea. Indeed, often when the stories work they make
their meaning more like poems than conventional short stories. As
narrative poems, they use intense language to pull the reader into the
situations they describe. Leggat’s best stories leave an emotional
residue which is lasting and real. The weaker stories, however, slide
by, unmemorable, as some poems do. Some of the stories become preachy.
"This is my life," one of them ends, a statement redundant to
all but the dullest reader. "Men dream about girls like her,"
is another final line that sounds more manifesto-like than literary. (It
is too literal than a literary summation ought to be.)
That said – there are numerous great lines in this collection. Here
are some of them:
- "I was too old for the suburbs but too young for the
city" (p22);
- "You wandered into the beginning of time when men were apes
and women weren’t invented yet" (p43);
- "She’s waiting for someone and knows it’s not him. It was
never him and that’s what hurts" (p51);
- "I look . . . and carry on because carrying on is easier at
this point" (p74);
- "That waitress is here because she got tired of
stripping" (p80);
- "She had so many people depending on her – for such a young
dog" (p102);
- "If I could be anything I’d be invisible" (p106).
My two favorite stories were "Fixed" and "Who
Die", both of which I’d rate as highly as anything else I’ve
read this year. Pull Gently, Tear Here is a compelling, often brilliant
collection, which is occasionally frustrating. It would be a better book
at 25% less the length. (I would begin cutting by dropping the first
three stories, and perhaps everything between "Little Devils in
Blue Jeans" and "The New Dead".) At close to 200 pages,
the books patterns, particularly the alienated stance of most (all?)
narrators, becomes relentless, and it becomes difficult to distinguish
the voice of each new story from the ones which went before.
Leggat has more than proven that she’s a voice to watch. A more
integrated effort next time would give us greater reason to cheer. |