Long Story Short
by Elyse Friedman
Anansi, 2007
Reviewed by Katelynn Schoop
For all the syntactical tricks and
laden-with-irony judgments of culture that bear down upon contemporary
fiction, there is something to be said for having heart. Not
sentimentalism or transparent appeals to emotion, but the strength of
heart required to take a good, long, unequivocal look at people – for
all their weaknesses and idiosyncrasies– and see something worth
writing about. Elyse Friedman's Long Story Short treads the boundary
between playfully satirical and deeply incisive, and while the tension
may falter at moments, the collection manages to articulate a keen
sensibility of the divide between ourselves and the selves we present to
others.
The collection is made up of a novella,
"A Bright Tragic Thing," and five stories that include the
Gold National Magazine Award for Fiction winner "The Soother."
The six pieces display an impressive range of narrative rhythm while
echoing themes and character-types amongst themselves. Moving from one
story to another is then surprisingly comfortable for an uncomfortable
book, content-wise. Beginning with "A Bright Tragic Thing,"
the reader is immediately introduced to Friedman's ear for dialogue and
sharp perception of the subtlety intrinsic to the best kind of irony
with the novella's teenage protagonist searching for
"so-bad-they're-good" t-shirt slogans. "Bright
Tragic" seems to carry on for longer than need be, despite its
moments of poignancy in which lessons are learned.
The stories that follow, however, speak
to a degree of care and craft in their construction that force the
reader to imaginatively and emotionally participate. Some are stronger
than others, with "The Soother" exploring a tobacco
executive's hidden life through terse and effective prose:
Irma unfastened the plastic clip on her
nursing bra and brought a hard brown nipple to Lucas's mouth. He latched
on and sucked greedily. She watched his hands curl into fists.
The story is propelled by
rhythmic dialogue, demanding a fast pace and perpetual forward-motion
that mirrors the pace of life required to maintain Lucas's constant
charade. Minimalist dialogue similarly drives "Truth," in
which the rhetorical trick of uninhibited honesty allows Friedman to
deftly shift between the despairingly comic – "[T]he fact that
you're a boozehound pretty much puts me off for anything long term, but
makes me wonder if I'll be able to take you home tonight and have
insincere sex with you once you're sloppy drunk" – and the
desperately real – "They reached for each other in the dark
room."
Naiveté and sentimentality are given
like treatment in the somewhat structurally incomplete "Lost
Kitten," as characters struggle with representing themselves and
the ways in which it can be artificial or entirely unmediated. The
delicacy of the story's prose create a strange sense of fragility around
its central character, drinking Tia Maria and licking her lips, that
tempers overtones of self-deception and tragically relatable
cluelessness. It is in Friedman's deftly combining this redemptive
handling of characters with a precise perception of just how and where
these characters come together that Long Story Short finds its heart.
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