The Flash of Longing
by Gwendolyn Guth
Friday Circle Chapbook Series, 2000
ISBN: 1-896-362-15-x
Reviewed by Joy Hewitt Mann
When Guth's poems make sense they make for wonderful senses; when she writes
obscure, arty poems, they speak too fluently of her years in academia. But
it is the in-between poems - the poems that take one a little aback on first
reading and then reward one deliciously in a second reading - that stand out
in this small 15-poem collection.
Several of the poems in this collection confounded me completely. Perhaps
they would not have done so for another reader. Often an oblique poem is
reward enough in the language alone for those who love poetry for poetry's
sake and do not need to "understand" the poem. But my also being a prose
writer makes me less accepting of such poems. I did not find that the
language could redeem these particular poems.
Thankfully, the majority of Guth's poems are accessible, poems like
"Zauberzeit," "One Day in Strathcona Park," and "Father, Cancer," a poem
that touches the heart with a fingertip.
You would pinch yourself unknowingly
in the height of an Ontario summer
and emotions would rush to surface:
a flower of black cells
bursting through
to find the sun.
Why can we speak of
this cancer
and not of the other?
But, as I indicated before, it is Guth's in-between poems - neither too
obscure, nor completely accessible - that make this small collection
worthwhile. Poems like "Fish Tales":
Before the novelty drowned
before insistence sharpened
to a fine point
there were humming motors
and photos of a lake in love
with itself.
and "Where the Horizon Meets the Sky":
She found the fine line where the horizon meets the sky,
saw it in the brown-blue iris of your eyes,
so new to clay and soaring.
She named you for that margin,
and for what lies beyond.
In such poems Gluth shows her strengths as a poet; she has found that "fine
line." One hopes she will continue along it.
Joy Hewitt Mann is now working on her sixth book. Lacrima Christi, a novel,
is due out in 2002, and Bone on Bone, her first full-length collection of
poetry, is scheduled to be published sometime in 2003.