Some bones and a story
by Alice Major
Wolsak and Wynn, 2001
Reviewed by Craig Thompson
The question of historical reconstruction is
delicate, as is the idea of re-creation. Because
history offers such a vast palette of information, the voice and reason
of the interpreter must be truly compelling for
re-creation to be successful.
Some bones and a story is Alice Major's sixth
book. The transparent afterword details Major's
process of re-creation, starting with her discovery
in the Oxford Dictionary of Saints that women
saints "almost never reflect the Church-sanctioned
role for a woman as wife and mother." This
compelled Major to delve further into the lair of
history, which, in the case of these particular
saints, is often available only in fragments or
through the oral tradition.
Using a few of the more "shadowy" stories of women
saints, Major has crafted a solid and occasionally
powerful set of poems. Her claim in the afterward
that "these monologues are not historical
reconstruction" but "narratives from a woman of my
time and place" states the obvious: she is
recontextualizing these stories in today's terms,
emphasizing the continuity of the woman's struggle
over hundreds of years. Gender politics is
not strictly her point, however: she revels in a construct
that intersects medieval language, modern sarcasm
and ennui to flesh out the modern tone. This
allows the reflection of her saints to be seen,
for instance, in Major's real-life grandmother,
who is reminiscent of Dorothea of Montau.
She references the title in the first stanza of
the collection: "Who was I then for a thousand
years/Just some bones and a story?" This poem,
about Saint Catherine, described in the prelude as
"removed from the official calendar in 1969," acts
as the foundation for this collection. We read
about injustice, history, and the various
disgraces handed Catherine. This piece is carried
off fiercely, more defiant and emotive that a
simple reconstruction of history.
Saint Marina, disguised as a monk, has a
compelling story recreated in six parts. Here
Major digs deep into her imagination, using mere
shards of story and resource to spread Marina’s
life across eight pages. This ends with "My bones.
A white assortment./The curved, clubbed femur, the carpels/like ivory game-pieces, the round orbit/of
eye-bone." When Major hits high notes, when she lets the
details break through and her cunning imagination
pierce into history to create these passages
without explication, the material resonates.
But she is prone to over-explanation. For
instance, "Possessed By Gravity" is full of
narrative markers like "How did I come to scramble
up here?", "How numb am I from holding on," the
repetition of "come down," "come down," the various
depictions of inflicted pain --one wonders why
Major did not compress this piece, as is suggested
by the following excerpt towards the end:
When I die,
the cross I burned
on my soft breast
will be revealed. I held the wire
in the candle flame
watched it turn red,
rage red. Touched
the wire to my skin.
Angry tooth.
Sharp suckling.
The pain, the waves like waves that leave
a swimmer gasping. Falling unconscious.
The strange, charred, charnal smell.
Such vitality drives home the force of this saint's violent "episodes
of possession" but is weakened
by the rest of the piece.
Other fine pieces include "Wilgefortis", a tale of
a bearded saint told in the modern context of
domestic abuse, where words and phrases like "huh,"
"if you can't beat 'em," "everyone cooled off" and
"plasticine" stretch the voice out. Thankfully,
Major does not indulge in this trick of modernizing
in other places.
"Saint Xene" is another success, imagining the
story of a woman who leaves piety behind to
discover "another god" and "take the name
stranger." The piece "Blessed Louisa Albertoni,
Widow" also succeeds in recreating the story of a
widow who bakes all her wealth into loaves of
bread for all the town, in the process of this
charity becoming "light as a loaf of good bread
swelling in the oven." The analogy with loaves and
fish, though overarching and obvious, is accounted
for and successful.
"Blessed Veronica and the Holy Trinity" rings well
with humour. Describing the saint whose talent to
the Church "was tears," Major allows humour ("a
careless baptism," "the liquid was thicker than
water, but clear and deep enough for the
Christ-fish to swim in") to let this mythological
tale breathe.
Major's tone and sentiment, generally, do not
weigh heavily on the mind. There is delight
throughout these pages. From the "shadowy" source
material, Major was able to dig into an era of
doubtless patriarchy and glean tales of female
triumph and sacrifice. There is much of historical
impact here, delivered in a charming, though
sometime over-explicated way. Major set out from
the confines of historical records and has created
an absorbing read that succeeds in her goal: to
provide new emotions and a revived spirit to "some
bones and a story."
Craig Thompson is a Toronto-based writer and
editor. |