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plodded on. I got to
hate the formal study of poetry. Analysis & complicated
prosody seemed reductive. I got the lowest mark I've ever
received in university: a D from Irving Layton
LAYTON'S
CREATIVE
WRITING
CLASS
Layton's creative writing class was another story. I
remember the anticipation of seeing him that first night. He
walked in, lit a cigarillo and welcomed us to the workshop.
He was nattily dressed in a thick corduroy jacket, shirt and
tie, dress pants - a mix of coordinated browns and greens -
and polished dress boots. He was impressive. He was famous.
He was, despite my later difficulty with his bombastic and
dogmatic side, a Canadian literary hero taking large risks
with his art and life.
The class was held for 3 hours in the evening, tables
arranged in a semi-circle, with 12 or 15 students. In this
context Layton was casual, ready to improvise and take us
through the mechanics of the craft, answer questions, prod
us into useful criticisms of each others' work, and make
editorial comments, or tell stories when he saw the
opportunity. He would always read each student's submission
out loud, and because of his sonorous voice, could give
weight to even the worst sentimental doggerel. But if the
poem or story was bad or flawed, he wouldn't let us leave
until he or someone admitted to it - usually the writer.
This criticism may have been a crushing blow to some, but
his summaries always seemed fair. Negative comments never
came without encouragement. He wanted the best from us, and
the best for the poem. He gave me an A.

DURING
THE
COFFEE
BREAK,
MARQUITA
CREVIER
During the coffee break of the first class I lit up a smoke
in the corner of the hall. I can't remember how we began
talking; maybe she asked for a light. But I do remember
immediately sensing her odd beauty and manner - and a kind
of simultaneous fear of her attractiveness: A small, wispy,
dark woman, with flowing dark hair, fine features - delicate
- a kind of worldly 40's movie star look. None of these
adjectives seem accurate, but her physical appearance seemed
to contain and reveal all you could simultaneously know and
not know about her fragile soul and being. It seemed that
nothing would be hidden from anyone allowed to enter the
spell. She was mysterious, and seemed haunted to say the
least. That night she asked me if I wrote poems, and asked
to see the manuscript I was working on, which I handed her
on the spot.
She came back the next week with great praise for my work.
In our conversations over the next year I found out that she
had had a book accepted by Faber and Faber while living in
England - but a breakdown and lack of interest in being
published at that point in her life broke the deal. She was
a friend of Irving Layton, and a one time lover of Leonard
Cohen. Her husband was way ahead of his time - a computer
programmer; her first husband, a famous sociologist. She was
very much recognized on the scene, yet I saw very few of her
poems, published or otherwise, and tho impressed with their
craft and depth, was myself starting to write in another
direction. I do remember that she vigorously promoted my
work and threatened one magazine editor by saying she'd pull
her poems unless my submission was accepted.
In 1967 Marquita was hospitalized for a recurring mental and
emotional disorder and we lost touch. Her book was
eventually published by a small press. Montreal poet Artie
Gold tells me that Marquita suffered a debilitating stroke
and eventually took her own life. But her great attention
buoyed me against my personal difficulties of that first
year - and she was, for me, an angel of poetry and a medium
of encouragement for its pursuit.

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