19 Knives
by Mark Anthony Jarman
House of Anansi Press, 2000
Reviewed by
Shane Neilson
Canlit is
moribund. False prophets continually assume our inbred throne.
The Canadian canon decomposes amongst names like Callaghan and
-gasp- Atwood, these elected by university professors. John Metcalf
has bemoaned as follows:
"The older
I get the more convinced I am that it is the qualities of a
writer's language that readers must connect with. Any fool can
have ideas. Only an artist will be able to put language through
its paces. Readers must come to a book not to "understand" it
but to cooperate with it. A book performs on the page. Readers
must learn to become part of that performance."
Mark Anthony
Jarman comes from academic miasma, where he's currently a sessional
professor hired at the University of New Brunswick, a location
prototype where false prophets assume tenured thrones. But as
a performance, 19 Knives is a stylistic tour de force where
the pace is flat out, racing to disastrous and saddening conclusions.
Jarman is
the preeminent Canadian stylist, surpassing the intellectual
hyperpostmodernist,
superselfreflective coffee-house navel gazing of Crosbie, Turner,
et al. He's a virtuoso performer riffing on drug abuse, muscle
cars, the America civil war, and maleness. His pumped-up prose
does set after set at the lyrical gym, interested in the sweating
and grunting of all-male protagonists. There is quirkiness, desperation,
and hopeless tenderness. There is much else, with a single premise
invariably based on the vapid black hole men sequentially jump
into, short story after short story.
Stylistic
central elements: fresh exploding metaphors detonating in distinctive
narrative with a familiar cadence: Joyce is Jarman's (and every
other modern author's) spiritual predecessor, along with Rick
Moody. But his personal version of these styles is best described
as a refreshing interpretation, a reincarnation new enough to
be welcome. It is his own, and Joyce never wrote about this material
(Moody has); though neither had/have quite the narrative bombast.
In Jarman's
seamless sea of language, metaphor flows into metaphor smoothly
in a word medium that's heavily imagistic and streaming. His sentences
don't really end. They extend- into one another, making commas
into redundancies and each story a complete thing, as visceral
as a punch in the gut, as startling as gunshots, or as melancholy
as a long, inflected sigh. His tone is sombre. Jarman is an honest-to-god
Canadian prose stylist who doesn't fraudulently exchange the word
"incomprehensible" for "poetry". This is likely why he hasn't
made a million: other lucrative heists leave such a haze, the
Canadian reading pubic nod hypnotically and think, "this here
goodum story." Better to say that than read an entire plotless
chapter and wonder what just happened, isn't it?
A quintessential
Jarman bar hums as follows, taken from "Guided by Voices":
"Black payphone
like a gun to my head I stand there, my feet disconnecting from
the flat earth getting air. The phone smells like vinegar and
someone has said, I could fall for you in a big way."
Note the internal
rhyme, alliteration, and tangentiality wrapped up in an imagistic
package, gift paper coming in an uninterrupted roll, images repeated
with fine variation. Jarman's sheer wordsmithery is astounding.
A man is burned by explosive propane in "Burn Man on a Texas Porch"
and ...
"I'm okay,
okay, will be fine except I'm hoovering all the oxygen around
me, and I'm burning like a circus poster, flames taking more
and more of my shape- am I moving or are they? I am hooked into
fire, I am hysterical light issuing beast noises in a world
of smoke."
As Jarman
mentions in this story, his prose is "accelerated"; it hurtles
homeward to the brain's registrar. And yes, it is vrai poetic:
tap out silently "da da da dada" in discrete units while reading
"A complicated bed and her arms on a tray and her serious expression
and unfucked-up skin and my hunger and love for a porch (I spied
a fair maiden), for the latest version of my lunatic past." Burn
Man is a masterpiece; it flirts with punnery and succeeds by force
of irony; it clangs with bad rhyme and still reads like a winner.
There are
three failings:
(1) Sometimes
Jarman apes poetry, writing tired limerick after limerick. Sentences
are constructed according to formula:
"She was serious,
brainy, disapproved of me not being able to put a sentence together.
I knew she knew the word hippocampus. On the dance floor I seized
up, stopped dancing completely and stared at my paralysis, and
I fled out the alarmed doors, red bells and hammers smashing.,
crowd panic, and then the girls definitely sensed some failing
in me. My high school years breathed disappointment, fear, white
noise. One thing did not lead to another."
This structure
is taken from Rick Moody's experimental playbook, and Jarman owes
him a significant debt. So our Canadian stylist is not so new,
though it's new for us, until his heavily commaed prose reaches
a page number midway through 19 Knives. The Jarman accelerant
burns up completely, and half the journey remains. Does this hare
win the race with his finite quantity of fuel? Though the accelerant
is exhausted, its welcome heat lingers, as does the scorch.
(2) Any reader
of 19 Knives can pick out Jarman's favourite metaphors:
salty doom and hippocampus remembrance. These metaphors occur
too frequently; they are pulled from a stock bag of tricks invoked
in story after story. At first familiar, one comes to wish that
Jarman would pass the salt, or bypass the hippocampus and head
straight for the limbic system.
(3) Pop culture:
Jarman mentions consumer palaces like Sport Chek and Value Village.
He also refers to alterna-rock alterna-princes Pavement, Guided
by Voices, Alex B. Toklas, and several others. Posterity will
frown upon Jarman's university dorm music cool.
Yet Jarman
is just plain interesting, a fact belied by his subject matter.
As a Canadian who forged himself at the most prestigious writing
school in America, Jarman writes a story where a lousy Canadian
mounts an ill-fated charge against Wampum the vengeant Indian
victorious at Custer's folly. This Canadian soldier ends up killing
"ol' Iron Butt" in a story boasting the likes of Gabriel Dumont
and Louis Riel. Read it. Buy the book. And read Moody, too.
Can one write
compelling short stories (or novellas, or novels) that don't shirk
the word "literary" and force breathless readers to claustrophobic,
helpless ends? Jarman can, at the vanguard of his book's dustjacket's
squishy quote: "He doesn't just write about people, he put us
in their skins so that we feel their frailty and courage." And
he does. This is an ascendant work: Alice Munro will abdicate
in due time. A Canadian Moody will take her place.
Shane
Neilson is one of The Danforth Review's Poetry Editors. He is
a Nova Scotian poet who has published recently in Queen's Quarterly,
The Canadian Forum, and Pottersfield Portfolio. His poetry has
been featured in The Danforth
Review.
An interview
with Mark Anthony Jarman was featured in The
Danforth Review (March 2000).
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