A Picnic On Ice, Selected Poems
by Matthew Sweeney
Signal Editions, 2002
Reviewed
by Alex Boyd
A butcher pulls himself from the grave every
night, habitually serving the village he knows. A hanged man describes
the moments after the event, not the moments leading up to it. A man
separated from his wife becomes a crow and sits on a nearby tree
watching her. The poems of Ireland’s Matthew Sweeney are not all
morbid, but they are all highly original, and Signal Editions introduces
a selection representing twenty-years and ten books in A Picnic on
Ice.
Sweeney is a poet who is clearly aware that he
can’t help but be in his poems, at least incidentally, so he chooses
to avoid speaking directly about himself in favour of far more liberated
and creative methods. Not only does it allow him to neatly and
consistently sidestep cliché, he’s become a master of the fictional
poem, serious enough to be meaningful, irreverent enough to be
unpretentious, and still conveying a lot about character in a short
space.
"Gold," memorably describes the crabs
and squids that sit inside skulls, near bars of gold at the bottom of
the sea. And they couldn’t possibly understand or care about the plans
that "pulsed" in those heads. "The Women," is a
vivid description of a party that could have involved Sweeney, though if
it did he transplants it in time, making a reference to music on
"the wireless."
It’s as though Sweeney is conscious of how
little time we have (he mentions death often enough) and purposely
extends his reach, scattering his poems beyond his life.
It’s a refreshing change to be kept guessing
as to how much of the author is in each poem. But Sweeney certainly
appears, and it’s a pleasant surprise. The crow poem described above
is entitled "Sweeney," and in another poem, "The
House," rooms and happenings are described like something out of a
fable, until he concludes with the final lines "but it did have a
piano upstairs. / And I did grow up there."
A poem like "A Daydream Ahead" is a
surprisingly touching look at loss, and "The Aunt I Never Met"
is an excellent short portrait of a personality ("she played tennis
/ with priests, and beat them, / and drank Bloody Marys from a
bottle") that strikes the reader as very real.
The only unsatisfying moments in the book were a
result of the tendency for poems to carry on a few lines beyond the
climax. Sweeney has an interesting poem in "Reading," where
the "I" narrator explains that it was out of a feeling of
pointlessness in life that he took out a book and began reading while
driving on the M1. He explains "I had no one to hurry home
to," but the unnecessary final line "It didn’t seem a wrong
thing at all!" feels tacked on.
Sweeney employs verse, and this only seems to
happen in a handful of the poems where he hasn’t tightened the
language into stanzas, so it’s a minor complaint. This is literally
147 pages of solid poetry, with no section breaks, no headings
swallowing whole pages. It’s a highly recommended selection or
original and rewarding poems.
Alex Boyd