Environment Science and Technology Language Culture Home
   


A Walk in the Park

Program Area

This activity was written to contribute to the English poetry portion of the Grade 9 language program. It has been designed to be used in conjunction with Rhyme and Reason in the study of basic poesy as a starting point for student poetry writing.

Learning Outcomes

Teaching, learning and evaluation will focus on the student’s ability to:

  • Observe and describe their surroundings in an outdoor setting;
  • Record their observations and feelings in written and visual form;
  • Evaluate the impact of humans on natural surroundings.

Classroom Development

  1. Take the class on a walk in a river valley or other park. Observe and record the sights, sounds, smells, and touches of both natural and human-made things along the route.
  2. Ask students to find a place to sit alone (out of talking range of others) for 5-10 min. During this time, they should record their observations and their feelings. An easy way of getting students to find a place alone is to ask one at a time to stay behind at different places as the walk progresses.
  3. Back in the classroom, students share their observations and their rankings of these observations (see activity sheet) in small groups.
  4. Students write their impressions of this experience in prose form to help develop their vocabulary. The easiest way for students to get started on this writing is to list phrases and incomplete sentences and then to organize these into complete sentences. To turn this writing into poetry, they should break their sentences into lines, remove any unnecessary words, and make use of description and figurative language to produce vivid images.
  5. Use a cooperative learning strategy to share ideas and improve on this writing.
  6. Publish all of the poems in a booklet to be given to all students in the class. Students may wish to illustrate their poems before they are published.

Timing

Allow 45 min for the walking and recording observations. Allow 20 min for sharing observations. Set a time limit for the writing of phrases of approximately 15-20 min. This will force students to get their ideas down on paper. Allow 10 min for sharing writing in small groups and another 35 min for revising and producing polished writing.

Resources

Rhyme and Reason (poetry anthology)

Cross-disciplinary Links

Art/Photography—Students may want to illustrate their poems by sketching impressions or taking photographs which captures the mood of the poem.

Student Worksheet

During your walk through the park, find a place where you can sit alone and observe and record below the sights, sounds, and smells you detect. Record both the ones you like and the ones you don’t like. In the bottom right box, write any feelings you may be experiencing. Perhaps think about what you feel where you are sitting or about what is under your feet. What emotions do you have as you look and listen? When you have each box completed as fully as possible, rank each item within each box from most desirable to least desirable. When you return to the classroom, compare your list with those of others in a small group.

Divide the page into four and lable the sections Sights, sounds, Smells, Feelings (Physical and Emotional)

.