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Journal Writing on Environmental Themes

Program Area

This activity has been designed to be used for journal writing in the first 10 periods of a course (for approximately 20 min of each period). The object of this exercise is to encourage students to get their thoughts onto paper rather than to ensure correctness. Several entries could be based on environmental observations in a local park or outdoor area. Others could be based on readings which are suggested in this guide. At the end of the 10 periods, students will be expected to write a personal essay based on their journal entries. This guide provides suggestions for stimulating journal writing on an environmental theme. No student activity sheets are provided.

Learning Outcomes

Teaching, learning and evaluation will focus on the student’s ability to:
• Observe, imagine, and respond in writing to given situations related to a park;
• Compose a well-organized essay on their thoughts and feelings about a park.

Journal Suggestions

The following journal entry suggestions range from simplest to most complex. Give the appropriate ones to your students.

  1. Describe any evidence you can see, hear, smell, and touch to indicate that humans make use of this park. Explain your feelings about what you see.
  2. Imagine that you are an explorer who has been searching for this site for weeks. Today, you come over the hill on foot and see the site for the very first time. Write an entry in your Explorer’s Journal to express your pleasure at finally seeing this place and explain how it is or is not the way you imagined it to be.
  3. If you were a volunteer for the Canadian National Institute for the Blind and you were standing with a blind person at some point on the path, how would you describe to that person what you are seeing? Write your description in your journal. As you do this exercise, think about whether you would like to actually do this exercise as a class or as an individual.
  4. If you could build a community centre on this site, what would you like to see when you look out of the windows? How could you use this area and combine it with recreation?
  5. Every spring, around Easter weekend, there is a canoe race down the river in this park. Stand on the bridge and look north and south. Imagine that you are in that race. Describe your experience of riding in that canoe from as far north as you can see to as far south as you can see. Did you run into anything, get wet, get stuck, have to duck at some point?

Timing

Allow a few moments for the class to travel to the park with their journals. Allow 20 min for journal writing. As a teacher, you should do the journal writing exercise with your students. When you get back to the classroom, ask for volunteers to read what they have written. Students should not be forced or coerced to read their writing. Occasionally, students will ask you to read your writing. They need to know that you don’t have any magic formula for producing writing and that it is a difficult task for most people.

Evaluation Items

All students will compose a well-organized personal essay of no less than 5 paragraphs based on their journal entries. It will be up to the student to determine the thesis for this essay.

Cross-disciplinary Links

Art/Photography—Students may select to illustrate this essay through sketches or a photo essay.