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Incubus
Incubus by
Charlotte Dobson
Hard Shell Word Factory
438 pages, May 2000
ISBN 1582005567
Reviewed by Morgan Ann Adams


INCUBUS is a novel taken straight from nightmares. Living up to its horror/paranormal genre, INCUBUS is replete with writhing snakes, jungle chases and continuous mortal danger for protagonist archaeologist, Marty Murdoch. Charlotte Dobson's style is reminiscent of Anne Rice's vampire series. This is simultaneously compelling and hackneyed. While driven to keep reading, at times I felt INCUBUS was trying too hard to imitate this best-selling approach.

To Dobson's credit, the novel leaps immediately into storytelling. Dr. Martine Murdoch is in seclusion after her best-selling book which describes Mayan heart-eating cults, seems to catch on with popular cultists. Though blackballed in the scientific community, an old friend calls in Marty on an archaeological dig in Mexico. On her way there, Marty is pursued by enigmatic humans leaving dead bodies in her wake. What Marty finds in Mexico is confirmation of her worst nightmares and most unusual theories.

The beginning is colorful and exciting. Unfortunately, the complexity of the story requires too much exposition later on. The character of Marty has a habit of letting things happen to her, rather than being a proactive hero. As the novel progresses into more elaborate stages, Marty has a tendency to be surprised at revelations that are often obvious to the reader. Despite some basic plot complications, Dobson has crafted a story that will satisfy both horror and suspense readers. Her knowledge and use of Mayan customs is quite impressive. The obvious depth of research pays off, fixing with flair several difficulties in plot. The settings of ancient burial tombs and Mayan temples greatly enhance this story which relies heavily on ancient lore.

Though successful as a novel of horror, this book had enormous potential to blend in with wider genres. There is subtle mystery regarding Marty's own personal life that, if fleshed out, could strengthen the basic storyline. Dobson's inherent talent is obvious. She has a distinctive writing style that will surely mature with future efforts.


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