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Insufficient (1) |
Satisfactory (2) |
Good (3) |
Excellent (4) |
Style &
Presentation |
does not bear any resemblance to a newspaper obituary,
in style or look |
is written in proper style, or looks like a newspaper
article, but not both |
has a headline, is typed in columns, and is written like
an obituary |
exceptionally accurate appearance and writing style perfectly
duplicates obituary style |
Content |
makes inadequate reference to Boulet's experiences and
character |
some references but incomplete; fails to tell reader
enough about Boulet |
both experiences and personality are solidly based on
Boulet's letters |
very complete re-telling of Boulet's life and character;
makes creative inferences as well |
Revision |
obituary is identical to rough draft in spite of suggested
changes |
only minor changes have been made to rough draft |
both content and phrasing are noticeably improved |
thoroughly edited, revised, and improved as required
from rough draft |